نمونه writing آیلتس با نمره 9 - BAND 9 IELTS ESSAY

نمونه writing آیلتس با نمره 9

BAND 9 IELTS ESSAY

IELTS WRITING Task 2 Topic

Nowadays many people are diagnosed with anorexia. What are the causes of this? What can be done to improve the situation?

Sample response

Fashion and lifestyle magazines are promoting unrealistic and impossible beauty standards. Wafer thin models adorn billboards all over the world. As a result, many people, especially teens now equate beauty with thinness. They refuse to eat because they are worried that they will become fat. In medical parlance, this disorder is called anorexia and it has become a major cause for concern.

Food is our fuel. If our body does not receive the right amounts of nutrients, it will not be able to function properly. Nutritional supplements can never be a substitute for food. Studies have shown that vitamins and minerals that the body receives through supplements are not absorbed properly. By contrast, the body can easily absorb the nutrients in foods. This undermines the importance of eating right.

While anorexia can be considered as a psychological disorder, it is a byproduct of our obsession with beauty and thinness. Fashion magazines and designers have their own reasons to promote thinness. If everyone is of the same size, it helps the mass production of clothes and other accessories. This will increase their profits. Unfortunately, teens who adulate super thin models and who refuse to eat do not realize that they are doing a disservice to their body.

Creating awareness about this menace is the first step to stop it. The government and the media can do a lot. In my opinion, the government needs to ban publications and commercials that promote impossible and unhealthy standards of beauty. Parents need to be vigilant too. They can easily spot the eating disorders in their children. If they feel that their children are not eating properly, they should consult a doctor and a counselor. Anorexia is not an incurable condition. Youngsters who are counseled against its ill-effects are more likely to adopt healthy eating habits.

To conclude, creating awareness about health and beauty is the first step towards combating anorexia. Youngsters need to realize that thinness is a sign of malnutrition, and not beauty. The government, doctors, media and parents need to make a concerted effort to dispel myths surrounding beauty.

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منابع آیلتس در هند

IELTS test in India – January 2014 (General Training)

Listening test

Section 1. A discussion between two friends who want to send various gifts to their school/college friends with a courier/mail service.

Section 2. A discussion of a man and a woman about their habits, opinions, daily routines, and also about a career as a football player or a referee.

Section 3. Don’t remember.

Section 4. A research into sleeping habits of various mammals.

Reading test

Passage 1. About a train company called Southpress. Description of their process, system, equipment, details required for routine upkeep, housekeeping and cleanliness of train coaches.
Questions: True/False/Not Given.

Passage 2. An advertisement of various shops selling antiques located at the local market.
Questions: locate information from the passage.

Passage 3. Safety policy of a company regarding ergonomics while working on computers.
Questions: filling in blanks.

Passage 4. An overtime work policy of a company stating eligibility criteria, hours, wages and so on.
Questions: filling in blanks.

Passage 5. A research report about African Grey Hornbill (a bird).
Questions: filling in blanks, multiple choice, match the author’s opinion to a paragraph.

Writing test

Writing task 1 (a letter)

You want to book a conference hall at the hotel for a meeting with your colleagues. Write a letter to the hotel manager stating your requirements and say

- How many days will be required for a meeting?
- How many people will be there?
- What other arrangements do you require?

Writing Task 2 (an essay)

Nowadays people are purchasing more than they need. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Give your opinion and examples based on your experience and knowledge.

Speaking test

Interview

- What is your full name?
- Can I see your ID?
- Where are you from?
- Do you work or study?
- How often do you use a computer for work?
- What purpose do you usually use a computer for?
- Do you think using the Internet is beneficial for you?
- Should we restrict use of the Internet and computers for children?

Cue Card

Talk about a situation when you saved some money. Please say

- What was the reason?
- How long did it take to save this money?
- Who helped you with saving it?

Discussion

- Do you think nowadays youth believe in saving money?
- Are women better at saving money then men?
- Do you save money? Why?

کلاس فشرده آیلتس

مدرس استاد آرین

آخرین مهلت ثبت نام 15 بهمن

شروع دوره 20 بهمن

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منابع آیلتس آکادمیک نیوزلند اکتبر 2013

منابع آیلتس آکادمیک نیوزلند اکتبر 2013 - IELTS test in New Zealand – October 2013 Academic Module

منابع آیلتس آکادمیک نیوزلند اکتبر 2013

IELTS test in New Zealand – October 2013 (Academic Module)

Listening test

Section 1. A mother was talking to a school principal about her son who is new in this school.

Section 2. An adviser was taking to students about their presentation.

Section 3. Don’t remember.

Section 4. A person was giving information about campus and its facilities for new students.

Reading test

Passage 1. About banana and its health benefits.

Passage 2, 3. Don’t remember.

Writing test

Writing task 1 (a report)

We were given a diagram showing the process a person has to go through to get a driving licence. We had to describe the process.

Writing task 2 (an essay)

Economic progress is one factor that is being considered to measure the success of a country, but there are other factors that should be considered when measuring the success of a country. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors do you think should be considered? Do you think one factor is more important than others?

Speaking test

Interview

- What is your full name?
- What can I call you?
- Can I see your ID?
- Do you work or study?
- What subjects are you studying?

Cue Card

Describe a special meal that you would like to have. Please say

- What is it?
- Where do you want to have it?
- Why is it so special?
- Whom would you like to have it with?

Discussion

- What do you think is the impact of importing food from other countries?

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